Posted: 05/13/2016 in house of blues, house of crazy

a cardinal and a rat at my feeder

dead porcelain doll in my hands.

people no one can see on the wraparound porch

like a row of ampersands.

  1. hedgewitch says:

    One more word would be too much. This is a complete Gothic tale–of mystery, imagination and a not insignificant dollop of horror.

  2. coalblack says:

    Reblogged this on Coal Black's House Of Pain and commented:

    coal’s latest.

  3. Sioux says:

    THIS is what Jerry Lee Lewis was singin’ ’bout when he sang, “Good God almighty and great balls of fire!” What a crapload of fineness you can say in just four lines.

  4. That last line is to the point.

  5. kanzensakura says:

    I love the last line especially. My folks always said Up.To.No.Good…… 🙂

  6. dani says:

    great imagery!

  7. erbiage says:

    people as ampersands, of course! how did i not see that before? thank you for opening my eye

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