sugar donuts

Posted: 08/07/2013 in house of love, house of strangers

i came in with sugar donuts

white as sweet ghosts

round as rings.


we got white fingers from the sugar donuts,

white lips and messy sheets

on a bed where we didn’t care about later.


i went to the bakery like i said,

but my sweet-eyed love, there is so much i never tell you.


i came in with sugar donuts,

but the sweet dust i just fed you

could’ve been anything.


for Mama Zen’s Words Count

  1. hedgewitch says:

    Sometimes the sugar is actually a controlled substance, but definitely no abuse going on here. Rings and sweet white ghosts…I love that.

  2. My my…wonder what was in that sweet dust. Love it!

  3. Sherry Marr says:

    Love “white as sweet ghosts”. Perfect!

  4. Kay Davies says:

    Oooh, it really could have been anything, couldn’t it? Nice to see this prompt from your perspective, Ms Coal. So glad you’re back.

  5. margaret says:

    …powdered sugar mixes well with most anything. Lets hope nothing too sinister!

  6. Mama Zen says:

    Death by doughnuts? I love it, Miss Coal!

  7. Maggie Grace says:

    Lurve this! Powder on the donuts. Hmmm. Anthrax?

  8. Herotomost says:

    Miss me some Coal Black…. We are kindred spirits I am
    so sure.

  9. Oooh! Deadly and divine in true coal black spirit.

  10. A passionate one!! I love the heck outta this! xo

  11. lolamouse says:

    A little black magic in the white powdered sugar? Still enticing!

  12. Helen Dehner says:

    Criminiy ~ remind me to check all white powdered donuts from this point forward.

  13. grapeling says:

    sweet and a little bit constricting, as the airway closes…

  14. Oh, you conniving little witch! Bet she never did get around to telling him, either. Hope it was an aphrodisiac, to help you both work off the donuts! Great take on the prompt, Shay! Amy

  15. Tiffany Coffman says:

    Absolutely criminal! Slammin’ ending!

  16. dani says:

    Damn! i wasn’t expecting that ending! and donuts are one of my top three favorite foods (along with pie and more pie.) i’ll never trust another sugar donut!

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