pretty funny

Posted: 01/25/2012 in house of fools, house of strangers

puppy peed the rug again,

so i hadda run to  7-11 for paper towels.

was thinkin, hurry up, line,

before it soaks in good.

two dickheads in front of me start in snickerin…

they lookin at the first person in line,

with the straight black hair to there, longer than mine.

holy shit, says one,

it’s a dude!

he’s prettyyyyyyy, and they laffin it up.

he’s funnyyyyy, and they can hardly stand up.

i know that guy.

seen him at meetings, he’s got a year and a half.

he’s native, and grew his hair as a power sign.

after a minute, i get my paper towels and

start out home to the puppy pee.

two guys are laid out next to the overturned trash barrel,

and they bleedin good.

ain’t nice but

i thought it was pretty funny.

  1. hedgewitch says:

    If only we could take our instant revenge on the asshats of the world as swiftly and surely as coal’s sword of vengeance here. Nothing more wounding than that behind the back/want you to hear putdown.

  2. Love that he grew his hair as a power sign. Also that the ignorant twits got a smackdown. That Coal Black – she can WRITE!

  3. Mama Zen says:

    And, that’s how we natives handle that shit!

  4. Your writing is so natural and conversational sounding, it reads great aloud — I hope you’re doing that somewhere.

  5. dani says:

    i agree! wanna HEAR you read some poetry! please?

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