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early, i took the northbound bus,
and the whole world seemed quiet, holy, and fine…
late, i took the southbound bus,
and i never saw such a devil-cursed line.
Almost a haiku there, coal–be careful.
One of my fave CSNs–rejoice, rejoice, we have no choice.
imma likin this!
love C S N & Y!
Northbound, an outward journey filled with promise – Southbound, a return journey filled with consequence.
well expressed contrast, much more than direction can change between early and late…
So the pendulum swings…
Oh, that is House of Blues alright. Pretty stunning capture in just four lines, and I like the way you’ve slowed time with the writing.
I like that album cover! (and I have never heard the song… I was only five when it came out, I think. I will have to do a little I-Tunes search! Thanks.
And your poem is AWESOME!
very deep for something so short.
This puts me in mind of a fine old blues tune. Hmmmmm….think it’s time for a little John Lee Hooker….
That’s what a day at work will get you!:)
I always feel like that when I leave work too, lol…
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