Posted: 12/03/2011 in house of love, house of strangers

femmebutch comes outta the cvs,

strides across the lot like it’s there just for her.

she talkin on her femmebutch cell–

and she got, oh does she got,

miles n miles of honey hair.

femmebutch is taller than a sweet cool drink,

swings easy into her big black truck.

she don’t care a lot for labels and such–

what she got, oh what she got,

she got it good and she got it much.


  1. hedgewitch says:

    Love the last line–another Coal special that would make excellent lyrics.

  2. Mama Zen says:

    yep, I’m lovin’ the last line, too!

  3. dani says:

    me three! and what you got, you got it good and you got it much.

  4. Marion says:

    Holy Johnny Cash, but that song was smokin’! Love your write, too. God, I wish I had one iota of your talent, you prolific, talented bitch. Tee-Hee. xoxo

  5. Laurie Kolp says:

    Love the diction!

  6. I’m with Marian.. This is excellent – the song-like rhythm, the colloquial voice… It unfolded like a snippet from a movie across the inner eye.

  7. Old Raven says:

    It sways and swings and then … swaggers a bit! 🙂

  8. shanyns says:

    LOVE it! Love IT! (Did I mention I love it?)

  9. Oh that Coal Black, she sure can sing!

  10. Helen says:

    Yep, it’s mighty good.

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