dontcha know

Posted: 06/18/2011 in house of love, house of women

dontcha think

it would be a bad idea

you and me?

dontcha think

it would be trouble?

oh, but there’s the way

you look at me

when you brush the hair

from my eyes,

and there’s the love I see

when i look in yours…

dontcha think

we oughta just walk away?

dontcha think

it would save

so much heartache?

but baby,

dontcha know i dream of lovin’ you?

dontcha know

i want to?

  1. Oh such longing. Anyone lucky enough to love you would be one happy girl, Shay!

  2. hedgewitch says:

    Yeah, Coal’s band is playin my song again. Want pwns heartache every time.

  3. lolamouse says:

    sometimes it’s better not to think

  4. Stacy says:

    Sounds like a forbidden love to me. But, sometimes, you just have to go for it! Thanks for coming by my blog ;o) Stacy ;o)

  5. brenda w says:

    The repetition of dontcha is catchy…it breaks the yearning up a bit, and adds a lightness to the piece, dontcha know.

  6. wayne says:

    i like what you have done here……nicely done and thanks for sharing

  7. Mama Zen says:

    But, what would that leave to write about?

  8. dani says:

    trouble or not, how can you walk away from love in the eyes?

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