Posted: 04/20/2011 in house of fools, house of love, house of women


(friend said)

got to stand up,

be strong

and ya

can’t go wrong.

ok, so

cross my arms,

open my mouth

to let you know…

i can’t blah, and blah de la no more.

oh, if ya hadna kissed me, babe,

make my lips stop talkin

floor sinks away

heel comes up,

aw shucks, i told ya

sure enough.

  1. Kim Nelson says:

    Damn! Some habits are hard to break!

  2. Love it. You nailed it!

  3. brian says:

    sho nuff…
    now you upta snuff…
    if i hadda ida givya A++

    (you will notice there is a ‘g’ in there)

  4. Mama Zen says:

    I’m sorry, were you saying something?

  5. hedgewitch says:

    Rollin the dice and rockin the house

    look ma, no g’s!

  6. lolamouse says:

    Me thinks Coal Black’s mood is not so black these days…

  7. dani says:

    sure enough.

  8. Natasha says:

    Gotta love this! Rhythm, flow, you go girl! Much Poetry Love…Miss Queen~Thang (Sorry bout the g’s~) Write~0n

  9. Vinay says:

    oh this was nice 😀 the verse flowed and just felt like a conversation too. beautiful.

    My One Shot

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